Deuce, I'll give you props for trying something unique and I think you definitely have some really cool stuff going on. There are also some serious flaws with that concept, but that's not unusual for version 1. For one, the colors are too similar (especially in the large image to the right). It probably wouldn't present well on television. That might just be a problem with your rendering and not the actual idea, though. Just lighten up that light blue a bit and I think the issue is solved. Another problem is that the number font is pretty illegible (and downright ugly) -- is that supposed to be a 7? Then there's the issue of the lack of white. I don't have a problem with no white on the uniforms, but for the primary logo to be just one color is pretty revolutionary (or perhaps de-evolutionary) and I just don't see it flying in the NFL. Frankly, that logo doesn't work with just one color. The blade and the outline can't be the same color or you sort of lose the intended effect. Also, NFL rules don't allow a Nike logo to go there. I assume you just recolored a college uniform and didn't bother to correct that, but that would have to change. I'd love to see you mock up a version with a more appropriate number font (maybe like Texas A&M, which mirrors the effect in the Titans' sword logo), corrected colors and an away uniform. And, if you can stomach it, some white.